State the Relevance

State directly how each point, or each paragraph, is connected to the title or to the overall argument. If you feel that a point is relevant, but you have received feedback that your tutor does not, you could consider adding more explanation as to how or why it is connected.

Useful phrases include:

• This is important because...
• This is relevant to X because...
• In terms of [the main topic], this means...
• The significance of this is ...